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Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: You're here
Chapter 3-Final: [link]

Original rough draft: [link]

What year the flashback is set is purposely left ambiguous, but if you google, I'm sure you'll figure it out lol.

Although there's not much left of the fic (about 30% left), I feel like I should take this opportunity to explain something. Initially, this scene was quite explicit, but considering it's basically a dubcon (dubious consent) scene, I pulled back. I am against using rape as a plot device so this is the closest and most descriptive I'll ever get to writing a rape scene.

The only reason I wrote dubcon for this fic is because I felt it would provided great contrast to the next scene, which is utterly fluffy. It would also show just how much had changed, how much had developed between Yao and Ivan over half a century. I felt that without really saying it, the little flashbacks provides a little glimpse at the true depths of their relationship.

I plan to wrap up this fic quite soon. If things go according to plan, tomorrow night it'll finally end ^^, but life happens...

I'll try my best to be more descriptive next time. You don't know how hard it is to remain vague and not pull out your hair because the vagueness ruins the story flow OTL

This little PWP smut fic is turning out to be not so smutty after all. I feel like it's a smut fic without the actual smut. Still has no plot though lol
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Hey when you're writing these do you actually feel what Yao is feeling? Like if Yao is in pain do you feel it? I'm just asking because I've internalized Ivan so much that i feel everything that he feels and when Ivan is in pain, I really feel like I'm being tortured.